Varjak's looking for a dog. But what is a dog? This must be one...
Tobias | The dog was a weird, giant monster, with round, rubber paws. |
Clara | The dog was a huge, terrible monster with a shiny, metal body. |
Maia | The dog was a nasty, fearsome creature, with glaring, meanless eyes. |
Fernando | The dog was a huge creature, with a long space under the black thing. |
Amelia | The dog was a huge, loud, red monster, with sharp, metal teeth. |
Ryan | The dog was a frightening, terrible monster, with big, gloomy eyes |
Maëlle | The dog was a ginormous, metal beast with strange, big ears. |
Penelope | The dog was a terrifying, metal beast, with enormous, yellow, glowing eyes. |
Claudia | The dog was a frightening, formidable beast, with red and white glassy eyes. |
Cristina | The dog was a enormous, steam beast, with bright yellow eyes. |
Gustavo | The dog was a tremendous, terrifying, brute, with devilish eyes of pure iron. |
Rozenn | The dog was a striking, roaring monster who didn't stop for anyone. |
Jacques | The dog was a fierce, evil demon, with whirling, rubber legs. |
Mimi | The dog was a monstrous, abominable beast, with staring, blank eyes. |
Pablo | The fearsome dog was a vivid, loud animal with transparent, gloomy eyes. |
Alicia | The dog was a fearsome, strange beast, with a glass, transparent forehead. |
How did Varjak react? - our Emotion, sentences -
Maia | Gloomy, he walked along the dirty puddles. |
Amelia | Varjak was frightened, upset and scared |
Ryan | Terrified, Varjak ran away. |
Alicia | Terrified, Varjak turned and ran far. |
These are great sentences Y4. Well done. I really enjoyed this book, including the illustrations and particularly the one of the dog-car. Did you know there is a 2nd book about Varjak to look forward to?
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