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One day there were girls called Sabrina and Chloe.
They were both 11 years old.
They loved adventure, they were motivated.
Then went out and they found a maze. They didn't know it was a maze.
Then they entered in it and they heard a boom!
The door was closed, they got out then they saw a man.
He was the guard of the maze.
He said, "You are in danger; follow the colours."
They said "OK, thank you."
But when they looked at the colours it was going off.
So they ran their fastest.
There was a problem
ReplyDeleteHi Clara, I have deleted the extra copies. Perhaps you can explain the problem to us tomorrow.
ReplyDeleteThank you for being so speedy to write another story - It's fab! Mrs B :0)
I don't know why it has posted me as 'Anonymous' - I will have to ask Mr Gregg that too!
DeleteI don't know why you're anonymous today, Mrs Baldwin. At least we know you are you.
DeleteThank you Mr G!
DeleteAnd now you're back to your normal self, Mrs B!
DeleteYou did the story already! Well done.
ReplyDeleteWow Clara!! It´s amazing!! How did you do that so quickly? I really like the part when the man tells the girls called Sabrina and Chloe to follow the colors
ReplyDeleteYes - wow, Clara! I agree with Claudia: you've done this 100-word story really quickly! And you put the picture in too! Bravo!
ReplyDeleteThank you
ReplyDeleteThis maze is awesommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmme
ReplyDeletecooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool
ReplyDeleteThank you to everyone that comment
ReplyDeleteAksh you aree funny
ReplyDeleteThat story was really good. It has amazing colours.
ReplyDeleteThis story was so cccoooool
ReplyDeleteThank you Luis
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