Monday, October 14, 2013

The maze


One day there were  girls called Sabrina and Chloe.
They were both 11 years old.
They loved adventure, they were motivated.
Then went out and they found a maze. They didn't know it was a maze.

Then they entered in it and they heard a boom!
The door was closed, they got out then they saw a man.
He was the guard of the maze.
He said, "You are in danger; follow the colours."
They said "OK, thank you."

But when they looked at the colours it was going off.
So they ran their fastest.

17 comments:

  1. Hi Clara, I have deleted the extra copies. Perhaps you can explain the problem to us tomorrow.

    Thank you for being so speedy to write another story - It's fab! Mrs B :0)

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    1. I don't know why it has posted me as 'Anonymous' - I will have to ask Mr Gregg that too!

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    2. I don't know why you're anonymous today, Mrs Baldwin. At least we know you are you.

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    3. And now you're back to your normal self, Mrs B!

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  2. You did the story already! Well done.

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  3. Wow Clara!! It´s amazing!! How did you do that so quickly? I really like the part when the man tells the girls called Sabrina and Chloe to follow the colors

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  4. Yes - wow, Clara! I agree with Claudia: you've done this 100-word story really quickly! And you put the picture in too! Bravo!

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  5. This maze is awesommmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmme

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  6. cooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooool

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  7. Thank you to everyone that comment

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  8. That story was really good. It has amazing colours.

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