Thursday, November 7, 2013

haiku

It tickles my hand
It’s like a small ladybird.
Go back to your tree.

Rozenn


Red spotty firebug,
You look like a ladybird,
You have lovely spots.

Claudia


Sleepy praying priest,
Wish good luck to the firebug:
Fly baby firebug!

Jacques



It smells like cherry,
Lavender feels soft like fur,
It has flowers on.

Amelia


On the lavender
There is one last small flower
Which is dying now.

Alicia


Olive tree, cold, freeze,
Rosemary, maple tree burns,
Lavender curls up.

Pablo


Bushes that smell nice:
Lavender and Rosemary;
Not those spiky balls.

Tobias

Old olive tree curled,
Enjoying the gentle breeze, 
Sprouting fresh olives.

Mimi



 Light sings through the trees.
Leaves fall with a crunch of bugs.
The bugs are pretty crazy.

Penelope


When the red leaves fall,
The red firebugs fall as well,
And caterpillars.

Cristina


When the leaves fall down
They turn red and yellow up down
There are also fruit.

Maia


The maple is big,
Leaves have only six sides.
See, a spiky ball!

Fernando


Green spikes everywhere,
Maple tree hung with stink bombs:
I gave one to Jacques.

Gustavo


Red maple tree leaf,
Falling on the short green grass,
I take you back home.

Clara


The outline is white.
It looks like it is cracking:
A baby bird’s egg.

Ryan

6 comments:

  1. Year 4s absolutely stunning Haiku !!-you are all inspirational poets-I write Haiku and was so impressed with your work.some very vivid imagery and what beautiful sights in your school yard-look forward to reading more Haiku -Ms Cairns friend of Mrs Gow and Environmental Science teacher

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  2. What great work! Well done guys! :)

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  3. terrific work, amazing!

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