Wednesday, October 16, 2013

The Gigantic Cow

The gigantic cow called Luis was in EGYPT. 

Luis is scared because humans want to eat him.

Luis feels very bad.  He is hanging on the grill.  Something strange has happened. It was so horrible that Luis screamed "OH YOU IDIOTS, WHAT DID YOU DO TO MY BROTHER CALLED JUSTUS?!!!"

He tried to get out but it was impossible, he only could trust his brother Justus.  But Justus' heart wasn't working very well! 

A great big red gearwheel came in the tent. Everyone was in a big shock, especially Luis!  The big red gearwheel stared at Luis! RED!

by Luis

4 comments:

  1. I like how your story is very adventorous

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  2. I like that your story is about a cow.

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  3. it's so funny! I like when he said idiot !

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  4. A COW CALLED LUIS! IT'S JUST SO FUNNY! LOL!

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