Some of us like to be writers at home...
The Treasure Hunt
The Treasure Hunt
I was walking down the road, I was treasure hunting. I found something really shiny, but it was just .... an ordinary rock. I am hunting something special, something that I could find.
Suddenly I saw something golden, I thought that it was gold but when I picked it up.... It was only a piece of golden glass. This time I walked to the little pond, I got out a strainer - just right out of my bag, I got the strainer and reached in at the bottom of the pond... I got it up and SURPRISE... In the strainer there was a piece of gold, a diamond, ruby... I was very happy that I could get this LUCKY.
by Sanika
Well done for feeling inspired to write at home Sanika. I really enjoyed reading your work.
ReplyDeleteThank you I will maybe write some more.
DeleteSanika! I really like your story.And I love treasure hunts.
DeleteGreat little story Sanika!
ReplyDeleteYour story is just a bit over a hundred words atd that's given me an idea. In Year 5 we wrote some Hundred Word Stories:
Here's the link to the stories.
We could maybe all have a go at this in Year 4...?
I liked very much your story. What happened with the ruby?
ReplyDeleteIrene
I kept the ruby ( in the story) but I did'nt write it.
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